Incorporating Commentary

Today was another normal day of online learning. Today's lesson focused on incorporating commentary in a rhetorical analysis. Going into this lesson, I thought I had this concept down pretty good, but I learned that there was a lot I could improve on. I learned jus what was needed for the commentary and how it should be incorporated into my writing and I feel that it will improve my overall writing skills if I follow what the lesson taught me today. You truly learn something new every day.

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